It's Lovecraftian, just like the tentacle flower you posted.
I have plenty of suggestions already from those who have answered, and I worried a while back that I did indeed give you a story you were not going to enjoy even before the rest of its problems. How about don't trouble yourself with either script and we'll find some other way to work together at some point? :)
I'm on the fence here though, as I'm actually terrified of how bad it would have to be for you to make it not so far in. Suggestions so far will result in a new beginning being written, and the entire first section reorganized in a manner that actually makes sense, just for a couple of examples. So really I'm looking at, send what you've got and don't bother with any of the rest, or don't send what you've got and don't bother with any of the rest. I could live with either I guess.
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Date: 2010-07-17 01:18 am (UTC)I have plenty of suggestions already from those who have answered, and I worried a while back that I did indeed give you a story you were not going to enjoy even before the rest of its problems. How about don't trouble yourself with either script and we'll find some other way to work together at some point? :)
I'm on the fence here though, as I'm actually terrified of how bad it would have to be for you to make it not so far in. Suggestions so far will result in a new beginning being written, and the entire first section reorganized in a manner that actually makes sense, just for a couple of examples. So really I'm looking at, send what you've got and don't bother with any of the rest, or don't send what you've got and don't bother with any of the rest. I could live with either I guess.